Sunday, June 16, 2013

Chapter 2

Chapter 2
           
     It was a bright, fresh, warm new-leaf evening when the kit was born.  Two kits, on that note.  The ginger tom and the silver she-cat named them Stormkit and Petalkit, the two perfect, healthy just born, tom and she-cat.  They squealed and mewed like regular kits, but their mother knew they were more than just two kits.  There was something about them, Ivymist would say, they share some bond that I just can't explain.  But the tom would just reply that every queen felt that way about their kit, but they would soon learn that they had given birth to a normal kit who's destiny was to be a warrior, nothing more, only perhaps a medicine cat apprentice.
                And as the days grew colder, the kits grew and grew, and soon the young queen moved back to the warrior's den, and the kits blossomed into apprentices.  They worked hard and were skilled fighters, bound to be great, hard-working warriors.  Every hunting patrol they would come back and supply a well-stocked fresh kill pile, and well-marked borders.
                The leaf-bare turned back to new-leaf, and the cycle repeated.  Nothing seemed special about those two cats, nothing pecular.  Yet the queen Ivymist still carried that feeling, and Flamestar still denied it.  Soon, their father recieved the privilage that most parents didn't have: the ability to name their own kin. 
                "Stormpaw and Petalpaw, do you promise to respect the warrior code and protect your clanmates, even at the cost of your life?" Flamestar asked them.
                "I do," they replied.  Flamestar nodded and gazed to the sky.  Sharpfang gave the aged tom his nod of approval.
                "Than by the power of StarClan, I give you your warrior names.   Petalpaw, you shall now be Petalblossom."  Petalblossom gazed at her father, her mother's silver fur shining in the sunlight.
                "And Stormpaw, you shall now be Stormspark.  May StarClan light your paths."  And as the young warrior shouted her kits' names, she then realized that it was only the ginger tom that would grow to be great, and the silver she-cat would be nothing more than a warrior.  This pained Ivymist, for the young she-cat would grow to be like the rest of the clan, while the tom would be like his father.  Like his father.  Ivymist hoped that he wouldn’t grow into a leader, to give another cat a chance.  The leader’s son, another leader.  It just didn’t seem right.
                Lots had changed since what the clans called the Rebellion.  For example, what were the young warriors had grown into senior warriors, and many new kits were welcomed into the nursery, along with new queens.  Darkfeather, Warsong, and Pebblestep all had kits of their own, and Fastclaw, Wolfstrike, and Thornclaw were now fathers.  Most of their kits were about five months old, Thornclaw and Pebblestep’s apprentices, along with Warsong and Wolfstrike’s.  Ashfeather had served her destiny and joined StarClan a few moons after the Rebellion, and Grayfur was the main medicine cat.  Pebblestep’s kit Cinderkit showed a major interest in herbs, and Grayfur invited her to share tongues with StarClan. 
                But the biggest change of all happened a few days after Stormspark and Petalblossom’s ceremony.  It was an event that left the entire clan shocked, especially Grayfur, Sharpfang, and Ivymist.  None of the clan had recovered from the shock of it, it was so unnatural.

                Without any warning, Flamestar had vanished.

Thursday, May 23, 2013

Chapter 1


               Chapter 1
 
   The kit slowly looks around, her eyes just opened.  Of course she doesn’t know what a kit should see when she first wakes, for it was just tail lengths of time since she was born.  She can see cats, cats unlike what she imagined.  Her image of cats are smooth looking, not a scar in sight.  These cats were the opposite.  They were covered in mats and dirt, scars covering their pelt.  What is wrong with these cats?  The kit couldn’t imagine what the scars must’ve felt like.  Pain.  Robin knows she hasn’t felt it yet.  But she would soon.  Lots of it.
“Mama?” She looks around, searching desperately for her mother’s warm scent.  But she can’t find her.  
“Mama?” She asks again, looking around.  Suddenly, Robin lets out a squeak of surprise.  She looks up.  Another squeal.  A tom with a large scar above his right eye has just dropped some foul smelling thing on top of her.  She looks up at the tom with questioning eyes.  Why did you just drop this... this, thing, on me?
“Whaaat?” The tom looks at her, his expression hardening.  
“You just dropped... something... on me!” Robin exclaims weakly.
“What, that?  Be thankful, you ungrateful kit!  That thing is your food!”  What? That’s my food?  Robin looks down on the old, moldy glob.  She looks back up at the cat.
“That’s all I can give you, so deal with it!” The cat growls.  Robin jumps back, the cat’s hostility surprising her.  
“But...” Robin starts.
“No buts!  Eat it or starve, either choice is fine with me!” The cat snarls at Robin.  Robin sniffles, holding back a tear.  She looks at the prey, then up at the cat again. The cat is staring at her, his expression unreadable.  Robin leans down toward the prey, and slowly takes a bite.  She wrinkles back in disgust, her tongue begging for mercy.  That is the most disgusting thing I’ve ever tasted!  Where did that thing even come from?  
“Well?”  Robin looks up at the tom.  
“What?”  Robin asks him.
“Well how did you like the taste of prey?” The tom replies with an eye roll.  That was prey?!  Everyone says it tastes good!  “Well?”
“It was horrible!”  Robin replies honestly.  She looks at her paws.
“That wasn’t the best prey around.  Its scarce, you know.”
“Oh.”  Robin looks around. Now that I think about it, I don’t know what this world is even like.  And where’s my mother? 
“Where’s mom?” Robin asks the tom.  His eyes harden.
“You would know,” he growls harshly.  Robin takes a step back.
“Wha-what do you mean?” She asks.  How would I know?  
“Don’t act like you don’t know!” The tom snarls.  He unseathes his claws and swipes at Robin.
“Ow!” Robin cries.  Blood drips from her side.  She cries out in pain.
“You stupid, stupid kit!  Everything is your fault you ungrateful furball!” Robin yowls again as pain floods through her other side.
“Please stop!” Robin cries.  His claws start to scrape at Robin’s side but she jumps back in perfect time.  But her eyes widen as the claws aim at her neck, and Robin shuts her eyes and prepares for the pain.
“Stop!” A yowl pierces Robin’s ears.  After a few seconds, she opens her eyes.  Robin gasps.  A beautiful light brown cat with a tiny bit of orange in her pelt is holding the tom off.  She has her mouth back in a snarl, her front legs meeting the tom’s.
“Stop it, Ash!” The tom snarls.  He backs down and challenges the she-cat with a fierce gaze.  The she-cat replies with a mew.
“You can’t blame your own kit for this, Dark.  It wasn’t her fault, and anyways, you never blame her brother for the unfortunate incident.” Ash’s words comfort Robin.  Wait, I have a brother?
“Sharp will be a strong warrior, unlike Robin.  She is weak and doesn’t even like the taste of prey!”  
“You can’t blame your own kit for this, Dark.”  That horrid tom is my FATHER?!
Her father’s words stung Robin with a force she’d never felt before.  Tears began to stream down her face once again.  
“That prey tasted bad!” Robi squeaks.  Ash looks at the dark gray tom, then down on the piece of prey Robin is next to.
“You fed her... this?” Ash asks worriedly.
“Well, duh!  What did you think I fed her, grass?” Dark replies sarcastically.
“Dark, that piece of prey is rotten!  Did she eat any!?” Ash’s words startle Robin.  Is there something wrong with it?
“I ate a bite,” Robin says to Ash.  She looks down at the small kit.
“Dark, I’m going to borrow Robin for a second.  That prey could make her sick,” Ash says.
“Let her die for all I care.”  Dark pads away into the forest.  Robin looks at Ash.
“I’m sorry, Robin.  You are a beautiful kit and you’ll grow to be a fine hunter one day.  Pay no attention to your father.  He’s not a nice cat,” Ash says as Robin follows her. 
“But what did he mean by it was all my fault?” Robin asks Ash.  What could I have possibly done?   Ash sighs.
“Your mother died after you were born.  She was a great but foolish cat, and was sick that day.”  Robin looks at her paws after Ash closes her mouth.
“It wasn’t your fault, Robin,” Ash says quickly.  Robin just nods.  If it wasn’t my fault then why would Father be mad?  Speaking on that topic, where is my brother?
“Where’s my brother?” Robin asks Ash.  Ash shrugs.
“I don’t know.  To be honest, if I weren’t the medicine cat I wouldn’t know you have a brother.  If you’re a good kitty when I give you your medicine, we can go look.  But we’ll have to be quiet.”
“Okay!!!!”  Robin squeals.  This is great!  We can go look for my brother!  “Where to?”
“To my den.  Remember, medicine first,” Ash replies.  Robin sighs.
“Alright,” she mutters.  “Where’s your den?”
“A little ways, away from all this rotten prey.”
“A little ways?”
“You’ll see.”  Robin follows Ash around and out of Dark’s den, and into the forest.  She looks up at the tall trees, the tallest she’s ever seen.  Soon, a roaring sound rings in Robin’s ears.
“What’s that?” she asks Ash.  Ash laughs.
“That’s a  waterfall, little one.  Follow close behind me; we’re close to me den.”  The trees clear up, and beautiful, crystal clear water sparkles in the distance.  Crisp, bright green grass litters the clearing, and plants circle around a small bush.
“Here we are,” Ash says.  She pads over to the plants.  Robin gasps.  The bush opens up inside to create a small but cozy hollow den big enough for a few cats to sleep in.  Behind the den, small not yet full grown tree with wide branches protects a wide bed of moss.  Plants ly all around the den in small holes to protect them from wind in small piles, others with roots dug in the ground.
“Whoa!” Robin sighs.  This place is beautiful, much prettier than Father’s den.  “Can I live here?” 
Ash laughs.
“I’m sure Dark will be okay with that.  But first, let’s get you your herbs.” Ash pads over to one hole and picks out a so called herb.
“This is yarrow.  It will make you throw up the rotten prey so you don’t get sick.  Eat it and swallow,” Ash instructs.  Robin laps up the yarrow like Ash told her to.“That’s a good kit,” Ash says.  Suddenly, Robin feels sick.  She vomits up the rotten prey.
“Oooh,” Robin groans.  She looks down at the gross glob of junk.
“Nice job, Robin.  You did very, very well.  I’m sorry your first piece of prey was that bad.”  Ash’s words comfort Robin.  I’m not alone in this world.  
“Thank you so much for your help, Ash.  I really appreciate it,” Robin says.  Ash just smiles.
“Of course, Robin.  No harm done.  Ready to go find your brother?”
“Oh yes!” Robin says excitedly.  Ash laughs.
“Let’s go,” Ash says.

Saturday, May 18, 2013

FireClan's Destiny

Hey! It's Grayfur.  Not sure if you heard or not, but Flamestar entered the contest for the three main characters in the prequel to The Story of FireClan.  Well, she didn't win, but her idea was so great!  Here's the entry:
The plot of is there is a murderer lurking in the shadows of Fireclan, each moon more and more cats are being killed in Fireclan and in different clans. A family member in Flamestar's Family tree is the main character his name is Stormkit-Stormflame. At 4 moons his parents, Oakheart and Featherbreeze are the first to be killed. Ever since then he has been trying to find the murderer. This plot is a mystery with constant twists and turns to it there needs to loads of mystery in it btw.
Btw Flamestar: I'm changing Stormflame.  I had to lecture Flamestar about being stupid again.  I mean, Flamestorm was his warrior name.  

Anyways, I liked the idea a lot, but it was too detailed for a 20 chapter story (each of the 5 main characters in Cats of the Northern Backyard will have 20 chapters for their stories).  So, I decided Flamestar's entry will have a whole separate story, and along with it, Robinsong's story!  And this story will start in the summer after school's over and after I'm deeper into Cats of the Northern Backyard.  I came up with the prologue just so there will be a bit of an intro.  I'll delete this post when I start the story.  This will be the sequel to FireClan, and the last story for FireClan as well.  But not the last story I make, of course.  I'll make a more stories and post them on more blogs, but they won't be based on clans.  Anyways, better not get too far ahead.  My point is, this story won't be started just yet, but it will soon.  Keep on reading!  :D
-Grayfur

Thursday, May 16, 2013


Prologue


The cream colored cat walks along the path of Silverpelt, her pelt dotted with stars.  She pads around the beautiful forest, taking in its sweet scent.  She walks around the terrain, just wandering, occasionally meeting other cats.  A small nod let them know she couldn’t stay and talk, and each cat understood.  Some cats she knows, some she doesn’t.  In StarClan, all cats are in the same clan.  Then, her aqua green eyes shine as she pauses, looking at something below.  A whole scene.  Her heart softens, and that cat sees... herself.  I realize the cat is me.  And I’ve wandered into the past, a long time ago.  I sigh and close my eyes.  The sight is horrifying.  Two unexpecting cats don’t realize they’re about to have their lives changed forever.  And that is the worst part.  No, the blood and the sadness aren’t what hurts my heart.  Its the fact that they never suspected it, never saw it coming.  When his life was changed forever.  When her life was.  When my life was.  For those who don’t know me, my name is Robinsong.  And I’m dead.  Dead.  Passed.  Diseased.  Gone.  The more I think about it, the more my body shivers.  I’m in StarClan.    I look below, seeing the whole story, the story I watched from my eyes.  But this is a bird’s eye view.  I see the cream-colored cat talking with her friends.  One is black with dark grey splotches, that’s Darkfeather.  And the beautiful white cat, Snowfur.  They were such great friends.  
“Hey, Robinsong.” Flamestar.  
“Hi, Flamestar!” My past self replies.  “Do you need something?”
“Yeah, er, would you, uh, want to go hunting with me?” Oh, Flamestar, the mouse-brained fur ball!
“Sure, Flamestar.  Where to?”  My past self asks.  The cream-colored cat looks ageless, no signs of gray on her muzzle, no battle scars like some cats.  A newly made warrior, not yet to have fought a battle in the clans.  She had time to heal.
“I was thinking over by the river?  There might be voles or fish to catch for Sharpfang and Graypaw.”  Flamestar waits for the cream-colored cat to catch up, and then they pad off.  I follow them from above, across the territory.  I remember those places.  I can see a picture of FireClan territory that I never could have before.  From above, there’s so much more than just camp.  I can see the many small clearings where I loved to visit to hunt in.  Small mice loved the sun that shone in the clearings and they could hide under the foilage.  Good times.
          Splash!  Splash!  I glance back at the two cats.  They’ve arrived in the river.  I gulp.  Here it comes...  But I can’t close my eyes.  I want to see.  I want to see where I went, and how far it was from FireClan... and Flamestar.  I watch it all.  It hasn’t come yet.  I look north of the cats and I spot them.  There are three, not one.  I should’ve remembered that.  The wolves.  There they are.  But I was making so much noise I should’ve seen it coming.  I close my eyes for a brief second, then open them, bracing myself for the past.  The wolves silently stalk forward, crouching down as wolves do.  The biggest beckons the others to stay behind by gazing at them with its yellow eyes.  Then, it continues to stalk by the river.  The cats are still oblivious to the danger watching them with its yellow eyes.  Then, the two cats look up as the wolf lunges.  The orange cat just stares at the wolf, but the cream one lunges and meets it mid-air.  I remember how I fought, but I could’t see what Flamestar did.  He doesn’t do well under pressure during a surprise attack, I guess.  Flamestar shakes his head and lunges at the cat, his eyes wide.  Together the two cats fight the wolf.  But the wolf is stronger.  He shakes off the orange tom but the cream one clings onto the wolf’s scruff with her life.  She keeps one unseathed set of claws on the wolf, and swings her body around so she can swipe at the wolf’s muzzle.  The wolf moves his head back, and the cat swipes the wolf under its left eye.  The wolf howls in agony.  And here it comes...  The wolf swings the cream-colored cat off its back while only one paw was hanging on.  She is launched into the air.
            “Robinsong!” Flamestar howls.  His legs are hurt.  That’s why he can’t move.  I watch as my body lays there, unmoving.  The wolf picks me up and carries me off.  Why, at the time I didn’t know.  But the truth eventually came out, and my life wasn’t as bad as I thought it was.  In fact, it was well lived and I enjoyed it.  In the end, the omen came true.  I had saved him, and I’m glad it worked that way.  Who knows what would’ve happened if I stayed in the clans with Flamestar?  The whole rebellion would’ve changed.  My thoughts float down back into the past, and I enter the cat that I once was, so long ago.